I Need help editing this paper. Below, is the feedback I got from my instructor. please read it carefully and edit this essay to what she asked.
“MLA heading please
title should not be bold in MLA
“This study paper will examine the positives” rephrase this and remove the allusion to the assignment
the only thing that should be in “” is something from a source
the first time you use a source you have to use attribution, which is introducing the source to the audience so you need the author’s first and last name, title of article, when it came out and where
in text citations do not have commas
you use SEO a lot, what other sources do you have?
no “in conclusion” in a college level paper
works cited?
add the attribution for your sources ”
Ive attached the draft.

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